2.12.05

Twilight

Wings of orange crawled all over

The red monsters blazed and cast their dark head

Engulfing all that came in their way.

Like snakes set on their prey,

Dart forward, lunging with their sharp fangs.

Screams of anguish. Pain all around.

Darkness sets, mercy it knows not.

Care, it knows none, for it has none.

It drowns out everything innocent.

Leaving no choice, no option, no trace of reason.

How fast it destroys, darkening the path it covers.

As quick as it came, the storm blew away quicker.

And as the embers begin to settle, slow, very slow does the memory fade.

Everything fades, becoming one with the past.And what the future holds, remains one unanswered.


12 comments:

Anonymous said...

I can't help but think of LOTR.
Holds way too many connections to that.
Except those are black beasts of course

Anonymous said...

oh...and by the way...its really good.

sharanya said...

lol.. thank you.

Sthupit Girl said...

this is really good.

but WHY is it so sad. and dark. and full of cries of pain???!!!

Avi said...

The words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
- Hazrat Inayat Khan

Now, Your words on the other hand...lol..just kiddin' :P

Awesome job woman...yet again! :D

sharanya said...

well you got kinda close to what i was aiming at sona. thank you for commenting!

miss wabbit said...

the second darkening beckons... it a blog after all.. it a collaboration of mighty minds(hint hint)

Sthupit Girl said...

hey!! long time no see??

i changed my temp. tell me how it looks asap, ok??!!

sharanya said...

skroo! amygdala!! oh my god!
preetika- will do

miss wabbit said...

wats wrong wit amygdala woman.. u do know wat it means dontcha?? i loved the defn...
preetika-->as a matter of fact i happened to see the one wit the snowflakes.. super it is!!

Sthupit Girl said...

thankus amygdala... u didnt leave a comment there, so this is a surprise. thanks a bunch.

sharanya!! update this damn thing. it's stuck!! hehehe! what are u soo busy with anyway madame??

sharanya said...

amygdala - yes, woman! i DO know... aghh!

preetika- well been doing stuff but got "writer's block" and all that